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watch me inspect medical factory(stethoscope&sphygmomanometer)

  1. Replaced figurative language with direct action verbs (“capture”/”measure”)
  2. Used “precision” to unify both instruments
  3. Simplified “严苛质检” → “strict checks”
  4. “every step counts” implies transparency (watch me)
  5. Maintained parallel structure for the instruments

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